L lilac New member Jul 6, 2009 #1 love letters slid from your moonlips like ruby wine cello words ebbing and diminishing like the currents in your heart Any suggestions for improvement / things you would change?
love letters slid from your moonlips like ruby wine cello words ebbing and diminishing like the currents in your heart Any suggestions for improvement / things you would change?
J je t'aime kelly New member Jul 6, 2009 #2 cello words? i don't get it. maybe just change that. everything else sounds lovely.
