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i smile as i enter the room
so many people so many faces
yet all i feel is loneliness
polite conversation brings me no joy
just three hours left till i go home
oh how i long for solitude
a quite life of solitude
is far away within this room
but no-ones there for me at home
my gaze it drifts around these faces
just watching as they share their joy
yet again i feel loneliness
you are not hear which causes my loneliness
which is why i opt for solitude
not happiness laughter or joy
walls are closing in, suffocating me in this room
i must escape these smiling faces
returning to the comfort of my home
i close the door as i enter my home
turn on the lights,dim my loneliness
pictures on walls filled with our faces
i choose this life of solitude
the worlds behind me inside this room
these four walls bring so much joy
the letter i write is filled with joy
as i sit here in our home
memories always present, forever in this room
but memories often fuel this loneliness
i am at one with solitude
no more prying faces
from in the picture i study our faces
carefree, happy filled with joy
at times we need this solitude
just three months left till you come home
to finally stop my loneliness
as you stand before me in this room
within this room is joy
beaming faces in our home
loneliness is cured by solitude
i smile as i enter the room
so many people so many faces
yet all i feel is loneliness
polite conversation brings me no joy
just three hours left till i go home
oh how i long for solitude
a quite life of solitude
is far away within this room
but no-ones there for me at home
my gaze it drifts around these faces
just watching as they share their joy
yet again i feel loneliness
you are not hear which causes my loneliness
which is why i opt for solitude
not happiness laughter or joy
walls are closing in, suffocating me in this room
i must escape these smiling faces
returning to the comfort of my home
i close the door as i enter my home
turn on the lights,dim my loneliness
pictures on walls filled with our faces
i choose this life of solitude
the worlds behind me inside this room
these four walls bring so much joy
the letter i write is filled with joy
as i sit here in our home
memories always present, forever in this room
but memories often fuel this loneliness
i am at one with solitude
no more prying faces
from in the picture i study our faces
carefree, happy filled with joy
at times we need this solitude
just three months left till you come home
to finally stop my loneliness
as you stand before me in this room
within this room is joy
beaming faces in our home
loneliness is cured by solitude