What do you think of my poem?

Please be gentle but yet assertive. I haven't written a poem in 3 years almost. I just got back in the swing of things.

I love you.
There’s no other way to say it.
Three of the strongest words to say how I feel.
When I see you, I can’t control my heart beat.
It feels as if its going to leave my body and run to you in front of your feet.
Stopping there to show it belongs to you.
You, and nobody else that’s who.
I promise later in life you can hold me in your arms and just lay there and sleep.
Counting 100 of Little Bo Peeps Sheeps :p
Laying my head on your shoulder.
Feeling as our heartbeats slowly get closer.
Synchronized as if they were joined together.
(Which would be an odd picture)
But I don’t care as long as we are together.
To be able to hold each other whenever we need to.
Or just whenever we want to.
I honestly am speechless as I type this.
Just thinking about you regardless.
I don’t want to cry so I have to stop this.
Remember I love you
Nobody else but you.
 
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