What do you think of my poem?

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In his heart, a world of goodness
In his words, he speaks truth and wisdom,
His love, pure and unique
His presence, remembered forever.

For he may not have a name
But that doesn’t change our love for him,
He has earned his hero title
And it shall remain with him forever.

His life cut short
By the actions beyond his control,
He kissed his love goodbye
Knowing it could be forever.

He walked among the brave
Every one of them innocent,
All suffering the effects
That the world would remember forever.

He doesn’t blame anyone
That he wasn’t there tomorrow,
For in his heart he knew
The memory he left behind would be forever.

He fell alone with nobody there to help him
His eyes becoming tired as he tried to fight,
His light slowly fading
This sleep was forever.


its about a soldier from the WW1 who was never identified.
 
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