What do you think of my poem?

[revired]

Agricultural Signature

The river slithers along the complete vein
Of current down the face of the world
Meandering quietly by
It’s flow amounting to worthless accounts of data

The current diverge circles
And communicates to wave floating by signatures in ripples
Entropy assuming
To mask the siltstone engaging in transmitting work

Wires connect to the still reflection
Draining water by immersion
In form mirrored flesh erected to act
Emerging in the revolution computed

 

[Nathan E]

I like your depiction of a mechanical Earth. In some places though the language seems a little contorted to suit the imagery used. You might try increasing the length a little? Good luck!

 

[<3corkey courtney<3]

i liked it alot just make it a little longer please