What do you think of my poem?

rondo

New member
Still Cacophonous

i)

Then I lied
I spoke
I parted my lips

A mirage still motion

ii)

The only two people in the world

Wisps of hair flow wind tangles
In a misty world
Beneath stars

The last night on Earth

A revolution wobbles by
An axis tonight, the world
Tomorrow the terror, bright

The last breath

Workings of an ecology paint an empty depth
A flower core so vast it spans the world
Rides on the peacock feather reflections of an empire

The last kiss

Cacophonous feathers take wing
Infuse the world in a phase sapphire discharge
Refracts melodiously throughout the continuum

The Elysian sunrise splinters

A mid Decemberist light amongst the mists
Working an idea in the expending nova
Like a murder in the stars

iii)

The mirage of a nuclear winter
 
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