What do you think of my poem?

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Life

Life is a row of dominoes-
One thing going wrong
Can disturb the whole balance.
Life is a disaster waiting to happen-
It can leave you stranded
And gasping for breath.
Life is a hurricane
That can wash you out to sea
In any minute.
But, just like there is always an eye
In the middle of every hurricane,
There is always something wonderful
In the middle of every life.
Life may have its catastrophes
But it is always a great adventure
And it is always worth living.
 
That's great! You rock!!!!!! Awesome Job!
Please go check out my questions with my poems in it i would love to hear your feedback! Thanks keep up the great work i would love to hear more from you! :)
 
wow! you really have good writing skills! this was like reading it form someone famous out of a textbook or something!
 
I have to say that i like this poem better than the other one i read, such wisdom in this one, i want to kno what was going through ur mind when u thought this up, good job man
 
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