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She dreamt of music, music swirling,
music sliding down her back,
symphonies and duets cradling her frail skin
She sat at the hospital piano each evening
with lavenders and cigarette smoke
braided into her hair, her fingers waltzing
like playful rain
The piano spoke to her
when eve spilled into the vacant room
like the tears that fell from her irises,
home reflected in them
Any suggestions for improvement/things you would change?
Does it make sense? What do you think it means?
music sliding down her back,
symphonies and duets cradling her frail skin
She sat at the hospital piano each evening
with lavenders and cigarette smoke
braided into her hair, her fingers waltzing
like playful rain
The piano spoke to her
when eve spilled into the vacant room
like the tears that fell from her irises,
home reflected in them
Any suggestions for improvement/things you would change?
Does it make sense? What do you think it means?