What do you think of my poem?

[~♥Court♥~]

i havent really writen any but it just poped into my head.
It's called: Can't you see?

I'm goin to go insaine.
why do I stay here?
I just wanna leave this place.
Can't you see?
this isn't the real me.
I'm not the happy girl you see.
havent you figured that out?
she just puts on an act.
she wants to runaway.
Can'tyou see?
she cant be here anymore.
Can't you see?
she planes her exscape.
Can't you see?
the bags she has packed.
shes ready to leave that night.
Cant you see?
she is finaly free.

Plz be somewat nice only my 2nd one. Thanks for ur opinons

 

[Poetically Resurrected]

I can see..many spelling errors,,,
punctuation erros....I can see....
,,,,but what I can also see..
is a sincere effort to touch...
....the hearts of many....

 

[secretsecret2312]

I really really like it. It's good. I think it's written in a cool style, and I think it's a concept for a poem. good job