What do you think of my poem?

[Madison]

She watches the petals fall
Slowly thru the air,
And land softly to the soil
Between the sharp blades of grass.

As rain drops mix with tears,
The air becomes sharp
And silence cuts through her
Where her heart once was.

Numbness takes over,
As she finally let’s go.
Her pain is finally released,
As it soars to the heavens.

 

[Precious]

Definitely a bit depressing if it means what I think it means...
But really good. You got talent.

If you want to edit it, you should add maybe two or three more stanzas.
And submit into poetry.com. It's really good!

 

[raquellie :]]

its a pretty poem.
i like it. :]
its kinda sad though, but thats why i like it.

 

[wacko jacko]

So, it took flight.

 

[H a n n a a ♥]

that made me sad ): but its beautiful. it really speaks to the reader. and has a strong message. and by the way i love the word choice

 

[nycxgirl]

Could be better.
Make it sound more like it makes sense.