What do you think of my poem?

[summer fling]

"we"

we breath
we blink
we feel
we think

our brains, they function
our lives, they junction

faced with disaster
we can master
any skill
even to kill

we are all innocent
until proven guilty

we all live
until.


**tell me what you think! any and all feedback is appreciated!! **

 

[popcorn chicken]

I really like this poem. I like how the first stanza all starts with 'we' . It's very good. Good work!