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dancetilldawn202
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I posted this a bit ago, but I revised it some so tell me what you think, constructive criticism welcome and appreciated
Your absence is so heavy
Still your presence is strong
And though you are adrift
I know with you I belong
Your heart was my metronome
Willingly I kept pace
But somewhere I was off
You left without a trace
Your voice was my lullaby
It drifted me to sleep
Now in dark wide-eyed nights
Your memory I keep
Anticipation lingers
With each ring of the phone
Though it is never you
And I remain alone
Caught up in your memory
My skin can feel your hand
My lips can feel your kiss
My heart you still command
Your absence is so heavy
Still your presence is strong
And though you are adrift
I know with you I belong
Your heart was my metronome
Willingly I kept pace
But somewhere I was off
You left without a trace
Your voice was my lullaby
It drifted me to sleep
Now in dark wide-eyed nights
Your memory I keep
Anticipation lingers
With each ring of the phone
Though it is never you
And I remain alone
Caught up in your memory
My skin can feel your hand
My lips can feel your kiss
My heart you still command