Death is peaceful,
Death is quite,
I try so hard with all my might,
To try and break free from this thing we call life.
You never saw me, you only just looked,
But from the first time I saw you,
I was hooked.
You’re always on my mind,
I wish I didn’t have to hide,
It’s just too hard to stay in the darkness,
And pretend that I don’t care.
Living my life,
It’s like living a nightmare.
I walk past,
Just to get your attention,
But I always know it will never last.
I’m certain you’re in my future,
But never my past,
I just wish I could be more to you,
Than a girl that acts like she’s not.
I want you to see me,
For whom I really am.
Why wait for tomorrow?
Why can’t you even wake up?
I want you to notice me.
Please give constructive criticism. Again; it is another experiment.
To me, it sucks. Cause I can't tell if what I write is any good.
Death is quite,
I try so hard with all my might,
To try and break free from this thing we call life.
You never saw me, you only just looked,
But from the first time I saw you,
I was hooked.
You’re always on my mind,
I wish I didn’t have to hide,
It’s just too hard to stay in the darkness,
And pretend that I don’t care.
Living my life,
It’s like living a nightmare.
I walk past,
Just to get your attention,
But I always know it will never last.
I’m certain you’re in my future,
But never my past,
I just wish I could be more to you,
Than a girl that acts like she’s not.
I want you to see me,
For whom I really am.
Why wait for tomorrow?
Why can’t you even wake up?
I want you to notice me.
Please give constructive criticism. Again; it is another experiment.
To me, it sucks. Cause I can't tell if what I write is any good.