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I've recently started writing poetry and I need you to please tell me what you think. Feel free to insult this poem, not me.
No I am not fine
No matter what my mouth says
Don't believe it
Believe my heart
Which is pleading for help
You can't see this
I have fooled you
And now I have realize I need help
Behind this placid smile
Are tears of blood
Dripping down slowly
I need your help
I have realize I can't fix myself
All alone
I need you
But I don't know how to ask for your help
Hear my cracking voice on this topic
Watch my watering eyes
Notice my habit of being alone
I need your help
I don't know how to ask for it
Please stop my life from ruining
No I am not fine
No matter what my mouth says
Don't believe it
Believe my heart
Which is pleading for help
You can't see this
I have fooled you
And now I have realize I need help
Behind this placid smile
Are tears of blood
Dripping down slowly
I need your help
I have realize I can't fix myself
All alone
I need you
But I don't know how to ask for your help
Hear my cracking voice on this topic
Watch my watering eyes
Notice my habit of being alone
I need your help
I don't know how to ask for it
Please stop my life from ruining