what do you think of my poem?

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I dont know you anymore
and you wouldnt know me
yet so you are right there
just inches inches away
the silence we hold
echoing throughout
the invisible mountains
that we once carved together

I tried to smile at you then
believe me I tried
but something forced my eyes down
I just dont know what
Whats wrong ....wrong ...its wrong

Im thinking about old times
and laughing and smiling with you
but thats in the past and
youre in the present
blind as I was, far beyond the bend...
just open your eyes one more time
and tell me you want to think again





be harsh
its for school
 
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