What do you think of my poem?????

[Vesper the Friendly Ghost]

RATS
There once was a smelly little rat name of cheezer.
who went in and ate all the frozen cookie dough in the freezer.
Then he ran around and pooped all over the GD house.
That dumb-a##ss relative of a mouse.
so then all the people who lived there died.
and Cheezer eventually cried
cause the freezer was empty
so Cheezer up and died too.


THE END.

 

[Trixie]

Woah - You should win a Pulitzer for that one! Great Job!

RIP CHEEZER!

 

[Because I Said So]

Its RUBBISH, AND THAT'S THE BOTTOM LINE BECAUSE I SAID SO.

 

[ssıʞღkiss©]

*tear*

I loved "the end"...

ssıʞღkiss

 

[MaybeMeg.]

Mmmmm.
Cookie dough.

 

[has he gone yet?]

gee that`s ever so sad poor little soul..super poem with such feeling.