what do you think of my poem?

Manuel

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i just wrote these, and i have to say english is not my first language so if you find something wrong please let me now ...

Perfect Timing

I just received a mug full of joy
that almost burst me into tears,
I look myself in the mirror and i came across something unusual,
i came across my smile.

In the dead dark of night,
In the quiet sound of silence,
I hear my heart running fast. Even faster,
I hear my soul dancing and jumping,
and yelling:
somebody loves me.

I now see joy
I now feel
I now live


manuel.
 
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