My voice teacher is encouraging me to write. I know you can't hear the music in my head...that sounds stupid but ummm tell me what you think. But please be nice about the criticism ...I've only written 5 other songs in my life. Thanks to all who answer!
Rain likes to tap me on the shoulder
But i won't gaze back
Or glaze back to the when
Way back then
To clouds that hail
Begin to ball because I'm frail
Instead let's hail again
Let's hail to truth,
And linger in lust long lost in our youth
Cause i dont do nothin
But pitter ponder through time
And I know you, you're the sailor
That was left behind
Mind swimmin through
Try to escape the blue
I'll brave the plundge
To pull it out of you
And I'll dunk my toes
Testing just what's here
Cause desire in me
Evaporates the fear
Or I'll convince myself
Long enough for me to try
And I oh I will scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
Prepolarized got my thoughts a'jammed
Stuck vying for sides
In this predicament
It goes rise then fall
Followed by inference
Just compose,keep benigne
Savor the inoncense
Try serious somewhere around next time
Seccumb to black dates
Recite your lines
Scallywaggle your way down
Only to find
That you may be a sailor but
But you're also mine
Just know I'll be waiting for you
And your breakthrough
The bow in life still awaits all of those who
Ever so desire to take on new crew
Whoever encompasses a compass and clear view
You already had one
But go ahead and try take two
And I'll dunk my toes
testing just what's here
Cause desire in me
Evaporates the fear
Or I'll convince myself
Long enough for me to try
And I oh I will scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
Rain likes to tap me on the shoulder
But i won't gaze back
Or glaze back to the when
Way back then
To clouds that hail
Begin to ball because I'm frail
Instead let's hail again
Let's hail to truth,
And linger in lust long lost in our youth
Cause i dont do nothin
But pitter ponder through time
And I know you, you're the sailor
That was left behind
Mind swimmin through
Try to escape the blue
I'll brave the plundge
To pull it out of you
And I'll dunk my toes
Testing just what's here
Cause desire in me
Evaporates the fear
Or I'll convince myself
Long enough for me to try
And I oh I will scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
Prepolarized got my thoughts a'jammed
Stuck vying for sides
In this predicament
It goes rise then fall
Followed by inference
Just compose,keep benigne
Savor the inoncense
Try serious somewhere around next time
Seccumb to black dates
Recite your lines
Scallywaggle your way down
Only to find
That you may be a sailor but
But you're also mine
Just know I'll be waiting for you
And your breakthrough
The bow in life still awaits all of those who
Ever so desire to take on new crew
Whoever encompasses a compass and clear view
You already had one
But go ahead and try take two
And I'll dunk my toes
testing just what's here
Cause desire in me
Evaporates the fear
Or I'll convince myself
Long enough for me to try
And I oh I will scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
And I'll scale the tides
keep it up