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I need a harsh opinion and ways to fix it. Thanks in advance
You have certainly taken my heart,
And held it high above my vertically challenged body.
You dangled it like a toy.
My heart pounds fast when I see you,
My mind cries when I see a girl,
Anywhere near you,
Especially if it is her.
She has taken your heart,
And gave you hope,
While my insides die,
And tears trickle down my face.
I may love you,
But what do you care?
I wear a blanket of imperfections so well.
Glasses covering these stone gray eyes.
A child on the outside,
A love-struck teen on the inside.
Now your personality shall be tested,
Once you obtain the fact of my love.
Your reaction will be typical,
And I shall not blame you.
I am bracing myself,
For you to drop this heart,
Like a mirror,
It shall shatter into millions of fragments,
Reflecting your disgusted face.
You have certainly taken my heart,
And held it high above my vertically challenged body.
You dangled it like a toy.
My heart pounds fast when I see you,
My mind cries when I see a girl,
Anywhere near you,
Especially if it is her.
She has taken your heart,
And gave you hope,
While my insides die,
And tears trickle down my face.
I may love you,
But what do you care?
I wear a blanket of imperfections so well.
Glasses covering these stone gray eyes.
A child on the outside,
A love-struck teen on the inside.
Now your personality shall be tested,
Once you obtain the fact of my love.
Your reaction will be typical,
And I shall not blame you.
I am bracing myself,
For you to drop this heart,
Like a mirror,
It shall shatter into millions of fragments,
Reflecting your disgusted face.