What do you think of my poem for L.A ?

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I cant believe I fell for your tricks
like evils spells from an old witch
so shallow and unkind ( OR should I say so conniving and evil)
You broke me inside
Scattered to pieces unable
To be picked up.

And what should I say as my final sentence it should say who this is about
I was thinking of saying
Oh boy look what you did
or something like that.

We are suppose to compare a person to something
 
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