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Have you ever started falling downward,
Stepping back but never onward,
Thinking that this can't get worse,
Wishing you were in a hearse,
No reason to continue waking,
Your mind and body cease the aching,
Nowhere that you must explore,
Nothing left that you deplore...
I wish that I could find the one,
That makes me want to see the sun,
No longer wishing I'd just die,
No need to fabricate a lie,
Someone who loves me for me,
Who doesn't care what others see,
I have wounds that others need,
But sometimes I just have to bleed.
 
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