Well im 14 years old and I wrote this poem a few days ago and I would like some feedback on it...I didnt really write it out of the blue I wrote it when i was going through something so idk if you will understand it but thanks anyways!
I'll cry a river
You won't care.
The love I have for you
You don't share.
I want you to love me
You wouldn't dare.
All I'm asking from you
Is to stop this pain
But trying to stop this pain
Is like
Trying to stop the rain.
I am helpless
I cannot take this stress,
So go on and smile
Make your life worthwhile
As I sit here
All alone
Feeling as if my heart
Has been thrown
Since I don't have you by my side
I might as well have died
Bye forever,
See you never.
Thanks once again!
I'll cry a river
You won't care.
The love I have for you
You don't share.
I want you to love me
You wouldn't dare.
All I'm asking from you
Is to stop this pain
But trying to stop this pain
Is like
Trying to stop the rain.
I am helpless
I cannot take this stress,
So go on and smile
Make your life worthwhile
As I sit here
All alone
Feeling as if my heart
Has been thrown
Since I don't have you by my side
I might as well have died
Bye forever,
See you never.
Thanks once again!