What do you think of my new poem about 9/11?

[Sammi]

Its called Forgetting To Never Forget

September 11th 2001,
Only a child of five years,
Now 13,
Now I cant remember,
Now I have forgotten,
I cant remember what I was doing,
I cant remember how I felt,
The worse day of American history,
And I will never remember,
I'll know it was there,
I'll know it was horrid,
I'll just never remember me,
I have forgotten,
To never forget,

 

[buzzy]

.i'm 14 now nd i remember...we all had a few mins silence in the hall at school. i think i was in lyk year 2 - great poem really true but i think it duz need rythm

 

[Hermione Granger]

its a good piece of writing. but it doesnt seem like a poem to me. poems have beats and rhythms. but this one doesnt.

 

[Hermione Granger]

its a good piece of writing. but it doesnt seem like a poem to me. poems have beats and rhythms. but this one doesnt.

 

[hayley(:]

It's really good and it shows that you care .
I'm 13 too haha .
But it shows that you'll never forget the day that 376 firefighters died .

 

[imported_hayley(:]

It's really good and it shows that you care .
I'm 13 too haha .
But it shows that you'll never forget the day that 376 firefighters died .

 

[hayley(:]

It's really good and it shows that you care .
I'm 13 too haha .
But it shows that you'll never forget the day that 376 firefighters died .