What do you think of my narrative poem??? (how monsters are made)?

Sin Is Heroine

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Critique would be nice. Someone asked for a rhyming scheme poem so I made this up lol. I didn't think it was bad for a 5 minute poem.

How monsters are made


There was a boy who walked home everyday from school
He was very lonely and no one thought he was cool
He ate in the classroom because no one would talk to him
The kids liked to jump him and one broke his limb.

He cried every night but one day decided to fight
He trained everyday till he had strength and might
Then the first thing he did was punched his bully in the nose
He hit him in the stomach and choked him with the water hose

The other kids became terrified of what he had done
He tortured their lives so now he was having fun
They tried to apologize regretting what was in the past
He wouldn't let them get away with it, especially not so fast
So he waited every day for them and right after class
He'd take them around the building and would punish their sass

The boy grew up to be a power driven
Ironic how monsters start liven
woops messed up on a power driven, remove the a lol.
 
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