What do you think of my love poem?

[Charles MacAodh]

When first I sat my eyes on thee
A something in me sprung,
And looked I down, and lo I see
A bulging erection.
Personally, I prefer poetry of a lewd and bawdy sort. but everyone has their taste.

 

[Sincerely]

It is awful and shameful
You can have fun poetry without the lewdness
Sorry, if I'm offensive, no, I take that back, it is too bad

 

[hp...just add water]

where is the class and tastefulness and all that shite?

 

[grlsoccer1]

I like the first three lines, the last line doesn't make sense to me.