SuzieBelle
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I know they arent very good, I just quickly wrote them just then. Im in Year 9.
Complete: (any pointers anything i could change)
DOG
He is man’s best friend
Tan eyes and a coat of silk
Loyal and faithful
BUTTERFLY
Fluttering softly
Swift, elegant wings of silk
Hues of mauve and blue
Incomplete: Any ideas, I wrote down a few words i thought would fit
CANVAS
A plain white canvas
A single stroke
Complete: (any pointers anything i could change)
DOG
He is man’s best friend
Tan eyes and a coat of silk
Loyal and faithful
BUTTERFLY
Fluttering softly
Swift, elegant wings of silk
Hues of mauve and blue
Incomplete: Any ideas, I wrote down a few words i thought would fit
CANVAS
A plain white canvas
A single stroke
my favorite haiku ever. i'm not a big fan of haikus tbh! They're just a little bland for my taste. I think though, as far as haikus go yours are pretty good!