Here is the description so far of the story this is not my official yet so if you want to add or suggest changes you can =]
Serena is a reincarnation of a lover of a vampire or demon in a human shape form named Luke (sorry l know your probably tired of the vampire stuff but its just a possibly because it may make more sense to the story.). Luke was asleep for a 100 years, he was put under a spell by Grace(Luke's lover) before her death so he wont be agony all his life for her. However the spell is broken by the scream of Serena and awakens, since she is the reincarnation of Grace she is the only one now that can break that spell. As he awakens he remembers Grace telling him to find her reincarnation if he ever were to awaken. So he set off to find his past love and when he finally meets her he is in shock of the reincarnation he met since she is the opposite of what his true love once was.
Now with this, He gets rather annoyed with her and has a hard time believing she is the reincarnation since she is a different personality like she is more immature and less serious than grace was. and it effects Luke's too, his personality changes into a more playful yet stubborn and cranky guy, they start to have a love-hate relationship, constantly auguring/ disagreeing with each other yet secretly caring for one another at the same time.
so far this is all l got, l was adding maybe a love triangle having Serena fall in love with a villain who is enemies with Luke, and also had a spell on him but by someone else he even resembles Luke in a way and comes to the present and finds and spends time with serena to lure her in to come with him he also loved Grace and was angry at Luke for having her.So he sees Serena as a replacement.
So do u think this is a good idea for a story. l am still creating ideas and doing more outlines and developing deeper plot and all that stuff, but do you think this stuff sounds interesting? do you know ways to make it more interesting and better? thanks
Oh also Luke also starts to develop feelings for her too instead of just seeing her as a reincarnation of Grace, as they fall in love on their own Serena is hurt because she is convinced that he just likes her because she is the reincarnation of Grace, but he developed feelings for her character
Serena is a reincarnation of a lover of a vampire or demon in a human shape form named Luke (sorry l know your probably tired of the vampire stuff but its just a possibly because it may make more sense to the story.). Luke was asleep for a 100 years, he was put under a spell by Grace(Luke's lover) before her death so he wont be agony all his life for her. However the spell is broken by the scream of Serena and awakens, since she is the reincarnation of Grace she is the only one now that can break that spell. As he awakens he remembers Grace telling him to find her reincarnation if he ever were to awaken. So he set off to find his past love and when he finally meets her he is in shock of the reincarnation he met since she is the opposite of what his true love once was.
Now with this, He gets rather annoyed with her and has a hard time believing she is the reincarnation since she is a different personality like she is more immature and less serious than grace was. and it effects Luke's too, his personality changes into a more playful yet stubborn and cranky guy, they start to have a love-hate relationship, constantly auguring/ disagreeing with each other yet secretly caring for one another at the same time.
so far this is all l got, l was adding maybe a love triangle having Serena fall in love with a villain who is enemies with Luke, and also had a spell on him but by someone else he even resembles Luke in a way and comes to the present and finds and spends time with serena to lure her in to come with him he also loved Grace and was angry at Luke for having her.So he sees Serena as a replacement.
So do u think this is a good idea for a story. l am still creating ideas and doing more outlines and developing deeper plot and all that stuff, but do you think this stuff sounds interesting? do you know ways to make it more interesting and better? thanks
Oh also Luke also starts to develop feelings for her too instead of just seeing her as a reincarnation of Grace, as they fall in love on their own Serena is hurt because she is convinced that he just likes her because she is the reincarnation of Grace, but he developed feelings for her character