What do you think of my dark, haunting poetry from the depths of my weary soul?

Poopity Poop

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I just started this and I think I might use them as lyrics. Maybe to a goth metal song or something. Does this capture the essence of my tortured spirit or am I just whistlin' dixie?

My little gloomy one is made of cabbage,
My little gloomy one is made of cheese.
My dying lovely one goes great with home style potatoes,
My pallid longing one comes with a side of au jus for dippin'!

What do you think so far?
 
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