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So here a preview on a Random page that i picked on my 2 chapter. I haven't got to editing it yet so there will be grammar mistakes.
It was time! I was going to make him pay. Oh i couldn't wait till he comes home. As i slip into the kitchen i open the top drawer. Running my fingers on a Velvet box i slowly opened it. "1.....small.....extremely sharp..knife" i whispered. I lifted the knife carefully out of the box. Letting it shimmer in the light. As the alarm went off, I slipped the knife carefully into my back pocket and went to great him. He hugged me adn went to go watch his football. "Lets play a..... game shall we" i mumbled in his ear. "What type of games" he smiled back. I slowly stood up and went into a draw. "How about a game of escape the rope" i smiled back. He looked confused." I tie you up and you have to escape. So get over here." i whisper. After 5 fisher men's bend knots i watched him struggle. Once i knew he was stuck i slowly raised the knife. "Emma what are you" he screamed at me his voice cracking in panic. I drove the knife down to wards his chest. Both our eyes close. I can hear the knife tear though the skin. I slowly open my eyes to see an arm stretch out in front of my target. "Oliver what are you doing i'm trying to murder him" i try unsuccessfully to shove him away. Then i noticed who i had stabbed. Blood poured from Oliver arm. He rasied his hand to the knife i pulled it out. Flinches for a seconde from pain. Oliver was losing blood quickly. "Great now i have one person unconsious and one person bleeding to death" i whisper. I had caused this know whta m i going to do.
So i know its weird because you ahve no idea whats gonig on but thats how chapter 2 ends. Anyways some background info might help understnad a bit.
Emma: Shes a perefect (angel) Who has every think she wants but is forced (by her father ) to marry a rich doctor. Who is also an angel.
Oliver is a bad *** Demon who started out as a Angel. He was nearly murdered by Emma's soon to be hubby. James saved him and brought him to coju and turned him demon
Cuju: Demon hell's leader, He is also Oliver father who fell for a angel who fell for him who wasen't all angel was also part demon wolf and a pinch of vampire. She and cujo have a child wich is rasied in Angel place.
Its kinda confusing but if i posted the book you would be like ohhhh but yer tell me what you think ignore the grammar and spelling please lol thanks (sorry so long)
It was time! I was going to make him pay. Oh i couldn't wait till he comes home. As i slip into the kitchen i open the top drawer. Running my fingers on a Velvet box i slowly opened it. "1.....small.....extremely sharp..knife" i whispered. I lifted the knife carefully out of the box. Letting it shimmer in the light. As the alarm went off, I slipped the knife carefully into my back pocket and went to great him. He hugged me adn went to go watch his football. "Lets play a..... game shall we" i mumbled in his ear. "What type of games" he smiled back. I slowly stood up and went into a draw. "How about a game of escape the rope" i smiled back. He looked confused." I tie you up and you have to escape. So get over here." i whisper. After 5 fisher men's bend knots i watched him struggle. Once i knew he was stuck i slowly raised the knife. "Emma what are you" he screamed at me his voice cracking in panic. I drove the knife down to wards his chest. Both our eyes close. I can hear the knife tear though the skin. I slowly open my eyes to see an arm stretch out in front of my target. "Oliver what are you doing i'm trying to murder him" i try unsuccessfully to shove him away. Then i noticed who i had stabbed. Blood poured from Oliver arm. He rasied his hand to the knife i pulled it out. Flinches for a seconde from pain. Oliver was losing blood quickly. "Great now i have one person unconsious and one person bleeding to death" i whisper. I had caused this know whta m i going to do.
So i know its weird because you ahve no idea whats gonig on but thats how chapter 2 ends. Anyways some background info might help understnad a bit.
Emma: Shes a perefect (angel) Who has every think she wants but is forced (by her father ) to marry a rich doctor. Who is also an angel.
Oliver is a bad *** Demon who started out as a Angel. He was nearly murdered by Emma's soon to be hubby. James saved him and brought him to coju and turned him demon
Cuju: Demon hell's leader, He is also Oliver father who fell for a angel who fell for him who wasen't all angel was also part demon wolf and a pinch of vampire. She and cujo have a child wich is rasied in Angel place.
Its kinda confusing but if i posted the book you would be like ohhhh but yer tell me what you think ignore the grammar and spelling please lol thanks (sorry so long)
Keep in mind that it's just a rough draft and that your gonna probely go bach through and doing some twiking. It was good.(I get the impression you might like aminae?)