What do you think of my book so far?

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Megan

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CHAPTER 1
When Kate Saygraves was 7 years old she had a goey incanted with fate .She was walking in the park with her mother, Leah, her father, John, and her 12 year old brother, Sam. As they where stroling the waether began to change rapitly. The trees swirled violently, the pond wiped and slashed as if it was in pain, the sky grow dark it seamed as if it was darker then black. The Saygraves scrambled for shelter but in there hast for the gazebo Kate tripped and fell in to the pond, they had yet to notice, by the time the noticed they had lost track of when they had lost her. Meanwhile Kate was struggling to keep her head above water.
i mit have some miss speelings because i wroit fast
 
It's very...umm...unique. I think that this is a very good pre-chapter, like a summary that some authors have before the first chapter of their book, explaining the story and getting the reader more interested in the plotline.

Hope I helped, and good luck with your story! =)
 
Hun, Thats a really good story-well so far. as u said a few mispellings but i really like it. And if you can u, when you are done u should put this yahoo answers or something. You are lucky, you have good ideas but i only write good my ideas are pretty suckish. This is an awesome idea for a story. Dont let those others tell u should give up. maybe a little work around the edges, it might turn out confusing. But keep it up
 
I think its pretty good but its missing something if u want to make it like she dies...and tries to keep her family from any more harm would be good...
Hope i helped
 
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