What do you think of my book idea?

[hallygirl]

Okay, so I know I'm stupid for posting this on the internet, but I really want to see what people think.

Medieval Fantasy book:

A boy makes a pact with a demon/ghost to help his brother who is dying from an illness. The demon has full control over the boy since he can kill the brother at any time by taking back his healing.

in order to fulfil his side of the pact, the boy must help find who murdered the demon (the demon was a prince of a small kingdom) and help him move on. The boy needs to infiltrate the castle, impersonating a nobleman. he gets in and actually begins to settle into his life as a noble. That is, until he's framed for the murder of the prince...

Okay, I know this isn't very clear, but I'm skeptical about putting too much detail up here. Don't worry about how the boy is framed if he didn't arrive to the castle until two or three weeks after the murder, I've got that figured out

Just from first impressions, what do you think? Would you read it? I know there's not much to go off of...

Oh, and please, no stealing. I know, that its futile saying this, but please, please, please...

Thanks in advance

 

[Nail]

Yes, I would definitely read it. The plot reminds me of "The Prince and the Pauper"

 

[eleeshea]

I think it sounds fantastic and I would totally read it. You pretty much got my hopes up that it comes out one day.

 

[san]

its interesting. im not really into murder mysteries but i do like a like fantasy. the beginning sounds just a little like what happened in the show supernatural but because u changed everything after that its original.

 

[eleeshea]

I think it sounds fantastic and I would totally read it. You pretty much got my hopes up that it comes out one day.

 

[san]

its interesting. im not really into murder mysteries but i do like a like fantasy. the beginning sounds just a little like what happened in the show supernatural but because u changed everything after that its original.