What do you think of my 4 line poem?

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nature’s curative smile: strung with orange days,
sunshine walks, and a million sunsets,
smears across my sore eyes
and rests gently on my wounded heart... where you used to be.




What do you think it means?
Does it make sense?
Any suggestions for improvement or things you would change?
 
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