What do you think of my 2 stanza epigram?

[Desmond the Moon Bear]

Death is when my loved ones must depart
Death is that sharp pain in my heart
Death is this feeling of sadness and pain
Death is this feeling that my happiness is slain
Death is the call to heaven or hell
Death is an eternal mansion or cell
Death is the day I will end my life
Death is day I give up the fight

Death is what I see
Death is what lives inside of me
Death gives me the chill
Deaths will surely fulfill
Death ends the pain
Death takes me on that train
Death is near
Death is finally here