what do you think about this poem?

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She drifts away
To flashbacks of yesterday
Showing her pictures in her mind
Entire memories she couldn’t find
Day by day they come again
Fragments of memories from within
Something that comes without a choice
She can still feel the terror of his voice
She wishes she could let go
All those memories from long ago
And yet she still remembers the horrible days when he was there
And the evil he held within his stare
She tries to forget
She does her best to block all the rest
 
its intereasting.....I LIKE IT! : ]

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cool poetry and with rime i like to use poetry with no rime but with honest and beauty inside the kind of poetry that doesn't rime but is still beautiful.

Know what i mean
 
Good storyline, and use of rhyming schemes.
Though the metre of the poem could use some work.
Try adjusting the syllables per line, so the stanzas are consistent.
 
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