What Do You Think About This Poem I Just Wrote?

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A Bored Person!!

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even though your not with me as much anymore
and even though we will probably not see eachother alot
i will always remember you
you may not remember me for you will make new friends
But no matter what you will always be a part of my life and heart
you will be my friend forever
even though i may not be your friend forever





this is a poem for a friend of mine that is moving
i basicly want to know if you think their is anything i can do to make it better. mabey rewording things or even adding more things! please help me. the best answer gets 10 P0ints!~~
 
even though your not with me as much anymore
and even though we will probably not see eachother alot
i will always remember you AND MISS YOU VERY MUCH
you may not remember me for you will make new friends
But no matter what you will always be a part of my life and heart
you will be my friend forever AND I WILL BE WITH YOU IN SPIRIT
even though i WILL BE A FORGOTTEN FRIEND
 
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