what do you think about this incomplete poem?

Ushna

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i actually wrote the following poem in 5 min.s as i had nothing else to do,, so should i continue writing it or just put it in the dustbin?


a tear of joy,
a cry of love,
a smile but a sigh,
could i give to thy,
and all i could do,
when i saw you,
was,to hug you tight,
oh my friend!you were so right,
..................................[i have to comp. it if it is worth completing]
 
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