What do you think about this book summary?

[Jadehero]

Okay so i found this book summary. i'm not gonna say where can someone give me their opinion cuz i don't know what to think....

A young woman who loses her mother and falls for a young man who impregnates her and leaves her that way, without knowing about the child. Meanwhile, a crazy is after the young woman, having an old rage of jealousy about the young man. The young woman gets attacked throughout the book multiple times. After the young man leaves, the young woman finds herself pregnant and alone. She meets a man whom she falls for at first sight, but doesn't act on these feelings, fearing another heartbreak. The young comes back just when the two have grown very close. The young woman finds herself facing a decision. Who will she choose, and who will make it through the stranger's fatal rage?

 

[cinders]

^^ I've no doubt s/he wrote it.

 

[emmalily]

way to complicated. there is to much going on

 

[Star]

Well, the sentances are jumpy. Maybe connect some of them with "and" or "then". you also have words that arent used right. Dont say "A crazy id after the young woman." say, "A crazy MAN is after the woman..."

 

[.Nicoleee]

Impregnates? It sounds like he's put an alien in her belly.

 

[ash]

Just to clarify...

A young women (let's call her Kate) loses her mother. Emotionally distraught, she allows a young man (let's call him Jim) to impregnate her, but then he leaves and she is heartbroken. Meanwhile, she is being stalked (?) by another man, who is enraged with jealousy, and so goes after Jim and gets really close to Kate (???). However, for whatever reason - perhaps her unstable personality - Kate is attacked several other times and the stalker is unable to protect her, so gives up on her and leaves her. Kate then meets another man who she falls in love with, but is afraid to act on her feelings, fearing that he is only pretending to be nice and could actually end up beating her up at any time he desired. She's also afraid of losing him. Just when Kate and this guy are settling into their new and comfortable lives together, Jim shows up and all sorts of problems arise again. She feels comfortable with that last guy but feels more alive around the unstable, perhaps violent Jim. Who will she choose, the stable one or the pashionate Jim?

Did I get that at all right? I hope so.

It's not my kind of story, but as a plot, it's pretty good. As a summary, not so good, because it reveals too much without getting any of the real specific details to get a person hooked. Try talking less about what actually happens and only hint at it, talking more about the emotions felt by the said Kate and what on earth is going through her mind by these events. Don't even reveal that she gets attacked heaps, just say it's pretty brutal or something to give readers a hint.

 

[san]

the plot seems interesting but it gives too much away. if you leave the reader in questioning about it really is about, it draws more attention.

 

[Alice]

Well, for a book summary, it sucked, telling us almost every majory detail in the book.
And as a book it think it would suck, seeing how the idea doesn' seem even remotely creative. If you wrote it I'm sorry to tell you this, if you didn't I sorry to tell who ever wrote this this. Good luck.

 

[Sydney]

I did not understand that.

 

[Abhishek]

You should make improvements on this summary. Well, this is a good summary.

 

[mushtaq_ahmad43]

She will outrightly rejct youngman. as she has already suffered at the hand of other young man who simply attacked and made her pregnant. It will a very cruel act of the young man . She has suffered too much and now she should reject the other man who is also interested in the sex. Enough is enough.

 

[Mena]

It doesn't flow. There are a few strange phrases like... Meanwhile, a crazy is and The young comes. You also repeat yourself with impregnates in the first sentence and pregnant a few sentences later. Good luck!!!