What do you think about my poem about death?

Bored and writing poetry. Opinions?

Upon exiting, I noticed something vague
An intriguing, provocative impression from within
A climactic vista saturated with clarity

All was explained by coincidence in this place
Thought cocoons itself before reemerging as awareness
Time collapses into a single repeating instance

The promise of waking arbitrary dissipates
Familiar sensations emerge and evaporate simultaneously
Potential becomes the only visible image

TY
Please. Do not read unless you are college educated.
 
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