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a few days ago i went to the airport and i saw so many people from different places. it was overwhelming and i felt like i traveled around the world!
then a story came up in my head.
pls read the 1st chapter..(an introduction kinda) of my story and give me feedbacks on it...
(also if you hava any better names do share...i just want the character to have a chinese last name)
Airport
Chapter 1: My Name Is Natalie
*My name is Natalie Liu. And I've always dreamed of traveling the world. But the nearest I got to my dream was working here in the airport...
*An airport is like a piece of the world in a building. You will meet people of different cultures, backgrounds, religion and place of origin.
*This is where my story began, when my world changed completely and where I faced friendship, losses and love.
Yummylol...
thanks for some of the tips!
Can someone think of a better name?
made a few changes on chapter one...after internalizing all of your awesome help..
does it sound better?
Airport
CHAPTER1
*My name is Natalie Wang. And I've always dreamed of traveling the world. My dad is a pilot and my mom is a stewardess.
*But the closest I got to my dream was working as a Customer Service in Taipei.
*An airport is like the world enclosed in a building.Here you will meet people of different cultures, backgrounds, religion and place of origin.
*This is where my story began, where my world changed
completely and where I faced friendship, love and losses.
then a story came up in my head.
pls read the 1st chapter..(an introduction kinda) of my story and give me feedbacks on it...
(also if you hava any better names do share...i just want the character to have a chinese last name)
Airport
Chapter 1: My Name Is Natalie
*My name is Natalie Liu. And I've always dreamed of traveling the world. But the nearest I got to my dream was working here in the airport...
*An airport is like a piece of the world in a building. You will meet people of different cultures, backgrounds, religion and place of origin.
*This is where my story began, when my world changed completely and where I faced friendship, losses and love.
Yummylol...
thanks for some of the tips!
Can someone think of a better name?
made a few changes on chapter one...after internalizing all of your awesome help..
does it sound better?
Airport
CHAPTER1
*My name is Natalie Wang. And I've always dreamed of traveling the world. My dad is a pilot and my mom is a stewardess.
*But the closest I got to my dream was working as a Customer Service in Taipei.
*An airport is like the world enclosed in a building.Here you will meet people of different cultures, backgrounds, religion and place of origin.
*This is where my story began, where my world changed
completely and where I faced friendship, love and losses.