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this is the link to my story. it is my first book. should the chapter be longer? should she be OCD? do i need to use better diction? do i need to add details? are any of the parts confusing or hard to understand? and please rate from 1-10. 1 the lowest- 10 the highest
this is the link to my story. it is my first book. should the chapter be longer? should she be OCD? do i need to use better diction? do i need to add details? are any of the parts confusing or hard to understand? and please rate from 1-10. 1 the lowest- 10 the highest