Kristopher
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I just want to see what you all think of my poem. Keep in mind this is not about me and I am in no way suicidal. I just came up with it after my buddy said to me, "river colored red" in some sentence (really can't remember why. Note: This will be copyrighted so don't try and steal. Thanks for your honest opinions.
"River Colored Red"
I cut myself because only in death will I gain
Because only in death can I release all my pain
I'm to young to die, but to upset to live
So I slowly grab the knife, because my life is what I'm about to give
I'll never get to say goodbye to my family or my friends
But I guess tis is the way my life is supposed to end
Sweated beads down my forehead as I clinch my fist
And my body begins to shake as I slowly slit my wrist
I watch as the blood flows in a river colored red
And a smile crosses my face for in awhile I'll be dead
I fall to the ground and stare at the blue sky
And finally feel at peace as I slowly begin to die
For death I know is certain now and there is no coming back
As I watch the vision of the once blue sky as it slowly fades to black
To Golden Seaman and anyone else who feels the same way I don't like to repeat myself but I will again this isn't about me and in no way am I recommending suicide to anyone but the fact remands there are still those who do it. Just cause I write a poem about it don't mean I am trying to get the masses to do it. Geez give me a break. I have many works on many topics and this is just one of them.
"River Colored Red"
I cut myself because only in death will I gain
Because only in death can I release all my pain
I'm to young to die, but to upset to live
So I slowly grab the knife, because my life is what I'm about to give
I'll never get to say goodbye to my family or my friends
But I guess tis is the way my life is supposed to end
Sweated beads down my forehead as I clinch my fist
And my body begins to shake as I slowly slit my wrist
I watch as the blood flows in a river colored red
And a smile crosses my face for in awhile I'll be dead
I fall to the ground and stare at the blue sky
And finally feel at peace as I slowly begin to die
For death I know is certain now and there is no coming back
As I watch the vision of the once blue sky as it slowly fades to black
To Golden Seaman and anyone else who feels the same way I don't like to repeat myself but I will again this isn't about me and in no way am I recommending suicide to anyone but the fact remands there are still those who do it. Just cause I write a poem about it don't mean I am trying to get the masses to do it. Geez give me a break. I have many works on many topics and this is just one of them.