What do you all think of my poem?

Jeremiah

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River Current:

I tried to calm my own storms
And fell head first in the water
I longed to find security but lost it all
I found nothing until I answered your call

You rescued me in my darkest night
You pulled me out of life’s currents
You set me on a rock
I saw all the shock of life’s perils
It all began to come back to me

Rushing at me like a river of pain
I thought it could never be the same
It could never be like before, before when I was safe

Oh how foolish I must have been
Drowning in life’s waters once again
Going under, being pulled away from Your glory
So faithful to my dismal whims
You saved me just like before
Before when I understood what trust was

I feel I am slipping off this rock once again
I feel the current sucking me in
I’m clinging to the rock but fear my grasp is slipping
I am falling and need to be rescued
Please come to my rescue
 
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