What do you all think of my poem?

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I wrote it late last night after talking to my best friend about how i miss the emotion in my relationships. :/
Title: Boyfriend
"What does every girl look for in a boyfriend?
A best friend not a boyfriend
A true love not a lover
Their romeo to the happily ending of Juliet
Their Edward and Bella moments.
Someone who; makes their heart turn to sand at just the simplest touch, their stomach go wild when they hear their voice, the feeling of being complete when she saw him."

Opinions?
Suggestions to my writing?
 
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