What do y'all think of my book so far?

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I walked home all alone like i always do thinking through what happened today. How could my sisters be so mean and wicked toward me. What did I ever do to deserve sisters like them? They are just so hateful toward everyone. When i got home all I heard was my baby brother screaming.
"Hey Mom," I said. "Hey Anna can you help me out and get the baby's bottle for me," she asked. "Yeah sure," I muttered. As soon as I got the bottle the door slammed open.
 
It's hard to think of this as a book when it couldn't fit a page, much less a chapter. It sounds okay. The writing style is very plain. There are many grammatical errors.

I'm just finding it hard to think of as a book, because of the length, and there is no describing of anything. No personality is shown.

Keep writing, never get discouraged.
 
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