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My first poem:
I Need You
I want your love, i need your love
i dont want his hatred, i dont need his hatred
i said i want your love, not his hatred
I said i need your love, not his hatred
i want your presence, i need your presence
i dont want his presence, i dont need his presence
i said i want your presence, not his
i said i need your presence, not his
i want your guidance, i need his guidance
i dont want his miss guidance, i dont need his miss guidance
i said i want your guidance, not his miss guidance
i said i need your guidance, not his miss guidance
i want your forgiving nature, i need your forgiving nature
i dont want his unforgiving nature, i dont need his unforgiving nature
i said i want your forgiving nature, not his unforgiving nature
i said i need your forgiving nature, not his unforgiving nature
your are my god and nobody nobody and i said nobody will ever take you away from me.
he is my enemy and nobody nobody, and i said nobody will every change my mind
so here i am asking for your forgiveness of my sins and to come into my life
so here i am telling him to step aside and to get out of my life.
thats my first one he is number 2
Deathbed
Here i lay on my deathbed
here i dread the day that ill pay
pay for the sins i have committed
here even in this very bed i have been told of a savior
savior that could even forgive my very sins
here i depate, am i too bad to go the place they call heaven
here i have been told, everyone sins, and everyone can go to heaven if they are saved
saved, will he save me?
here i know there is only one way, ask god, lord, forgive me, take my life and wash my sins away
here i lay on my eternal bed
thats number 2 here is number 3
oppertunity
oppertunity
most everyone gets it
not everyone uses it
only given so many
nothing like giving pennies out
so dont pout when judgement day comes
from reading this your given the oppertunity
there was number 3 hear is my latest one... number 4..
his presence
its like no other
its like there no bother in the world
its like your alone with him
its like noone exist but you and him
its like your in your own little land
its like not a thing going on in your mind
its like your no longer in a bind with the world
its like your drifting away from wordly things
its like no other
There is a reason for the repeats... its to signify thats what you need/want/love... to express above all meanings of life, above the worlds own understands, to say what you wish to say in a strong/profound way if you understand what im saying.
My first poem:
I Need You
I want your love, i need your love
i dont want his hatred, i dont need his hatred
i said i want your love, not his hatred
I said i need your love, not his hatred
i want your presence, i need your presence
i dont want his presence, i dont need his presence
i said i want your presence, not his
i said i need your presence, not his
i want your guidance, i need his guidance
i dont want his miss guidance, i dont need his miss guidance
i said i want your guidance, not his miss guidance
i said i need your guidance, not his miss guidance
i want your forgiving nature, i need your forgiving nature
i dont want his unforgiving nature, i dont need his unforgiving nature
i said i want your forgiving nature, not his unforgiving nature
i said i need your forgiving nature, not his unforgiving nature
your are my god and nobody nobody and i said nobody will ever take you away from me.
he is my enemy and nobody nobody, and i said nobody will every change my mind
so here i am asking for your forgiveness of my sins and to come into my life
so here i am telling him to step aside and to get out of my life.
thats my first one he is number 2
Deathbed
Here i lay on my deathbed
here i dread the day that ill pay
pay for the sins i have committed
here even in this very bed i have been told of a savior
savior that could even forgive my very sins
here i depate, am i too bad to go the place they call heaven
here i have been told, everyone sins, and everyone can go to heaven if they are saved
saved, will he save me?
here i know there is only one way, ask god, lord, forgive me, take my life and wash my sins away
here i lay on my eternal bed
thats number 2 here is number 3
oppertunity
oppertunity
most everyone gets it
not everyone uses it
only given so many
nothing like giving pennies out
so dont pout when judgement day comes
from reading this your given the oppertunity
there was number 3 hear is my latest one... number 4..
his presence
its like no other
its like there no bother in the world
its like your alone with him
its like noone exist but you and him
its like your in your own little land
its like not a thing going on in your mind
its like your no longer in a bind with the world
its like your drifting away from wordly things
its like no other
There is a reason for the repeats... its to signify thats what you need/want/love... to express above all meanings of life, above the worlds own understands, to say what you wish to say in a strong/profound way if you understand what im saying.