seriously, did you make this up or was it real? well, it doesnt matter. it is still good even if its real or not. i'd rate 8/10. the other two [sorry] was because it wasnt long enough!!! i wana no more! wuts gona happen next? will you make another one? if u are, im so gonna be the FIRST person to read it!!!!!! =] you should be a story writter.
