It's about pirates. In my book, it's natural to kill ppl... at least later on...
Here it is: ”Okay, relax. Concentrate. Aim!” I whispered to myself trying to shoot an apple on the little piece of land that I was able to see from the shore.
I was running out of training bullets and money too, so I tried to get high scores in my training until I get more money. At that moment, my hands were shaking, so I didn’t do it.
I put my dad’s old gun aside and sat on the ground to take a break. It was a bright day and I wished it would rain.
I hated the sun, the way it shone so bright, as if it was trying to blind me and fry me like a steak. I put my sunglasses on and tried looking at the sky.
“Even you reject me…” I said and imagined that the sky was so bright because then I wouldn’t be able to look at it.
I had to start training again, but I felt like I just couldn’t concentrate. I stared at the horizon. The ocean, the greenish water was something I could look at any time. I loved it. The only thing that made me happy and even the ocean had harmed me. It’s like one-sided love. I love the ocean, but it hates me. It takes away everything I have, leaving me alone living my miserable life.
Something appeared far away. It was hard to see in detail, but not hard to realize that it was a ship. It was coming my way, though the harbor was on the other side of the island. I waited for it to approach. I started thinking that if they were intruders trying to rob me and attack the village after that, it would be a good chance for me to train… and maybe even kill my first person, though that thought made me have goose bumps…
I grabbed my gun and waited patiently for the ship to get closer. I was preparing myself mentally… The thought of killing the people on the ship and stealing their money ran through my head many times, even if they would be good people. It freaked me out, but also interested. I had no chance of surviving in this world by being a good person; the only way for me to live would be the sinful way because no matter what I did, it just didn’t work out. I was still only 15, and was already planning my life as a pirate. I would have a crew of about 10 people and live a good life, full of excitement and adventure. I would get a tattoo and all the other crew members would have exactly the same one. Then in the future I would get hitched with the richest pirate on the ocean and…
I got so carried away with my thoughts, that I was really surprised that the ship was only about 100 meters away. I got my gun ready and waited for a boat. The water near the coast was very steep, so the ship was able to anchor right next to the shore. It wasn’t a very big ship so there was no chance that there were many people on it. It was a relive. If I could beat them, I could get the ship too!
Okay,,, so tell me ur opinion, would u be interested in reading the whole book?
BTW. english isn't my native language so there might be spelling and/or grammar mistakes. If u find some weird words or phrases that are not suitable, plz tell me.
THANX!!! i'm 13 yrs....
Here it is: ”Okay, relax. Concentrate. Aim!” I whispered to myself trying to shoot an apple on the little piece of land that I was able to see from the shore.
I was running out of training bullets and money too, so I tried to get high scores in my training until I get more money. At that moment, my hands were shaking, so I didn’t do it.
I put my dad’s old gun aside and sat on the ground to take a break. It was a bright day and I wished it would rain.
I hated the sun, the way it shone so bright, as if it was trying to blind me and fry me like a steak. I put my sunglasses on and tried looking at the sky.
“Even you reject me…” I said and imagined that the sky was so bright because then I wouldn’t be able to look at it.
I had to start training again, but I felt like I just couldn’t concentrate. I stared at the horizon. The ocean, the greenish water was something I could look at any time. I loved it. The only thing that made me happy and even the ocean had harmed me. It’s like one-sided love. I love the ocean, but it hates me. It takes away everything I have, leaving me alone living my miserable life.
Something appeared far away. It was hard to see in detail, but not hard to realize that it was a ship. It was coming my way, though the harbor was on the other side of the island. I waited for it to approach. I started thinking that if they were intruders trying to rob me and attack the village after that, it would be a good chance for me to train… and maybe even kill my first person, though that thought made me have goose bumps…
I grabbed my gun and waited patiently for the ship to get closer. I was preparing myself mentally… The thought of killing the people on the ship and stealing their money ran through my head many times, even if they would be good people. It freaked me out, but also interested. I had no chance of surviving in this world by being a good person; the only way for me to live would be the sinful way because no matter what I did, it just didn’t work out. I was still only 15, and was already planning my life as a pirate. I would have a crew of about 10 people and live a good life, full of excitement and adventure. I would get a tattoo and all the other crew members would have exactly the same one. Then in the future I would get hitched with the richest pirate on the ocean and…
I got so carried away with my thoughts, that I was really surprised that the ship was only about 100 meters away. I got my gun ready and waited for a boat. The water near the coast was very steep, so the ship was able to anchor right next to the shore. It wasn’t a very big ship so there was no chance that there were many people on it. It was a relive. If I could beat them, I could get the ship too!
Okay,,, so tell me ur opinion, would u be interested in reading the whole book?
BTW. english isn't my native language so there might be spelling and/or grammar mistakes. If u find some weird words or phrases that are not suitable, plz tell me.
THANX!!! i'm 13 yrs....