what do u think of my poem?

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this is for my english 11 class all the words in the quotes have to be the start of the line..

Heartbreak "Song.."

"You" held me
"Like a" first time mother holds her child
"Claiming to" always love me and to never hurt me
"Then wonder why i" am so hurt now that it is over with
"Wonder why" i have so much pain
"Why not" end it
"Before i" got really attached
"Why not" stop telling me lies
"Before i" started believing them
"Now im" trying to move on but
"Here i" am
"wondering" things i shouldn't be anymore
"all the things i" thought were perfect were lies
"if you had just" for once stopped thinking about just yourself
"you" come up to me
"and wonder why i" have so much painful anger, im
"sitting here looking at" a new beginning still
"trying to feel like" nothing happened
"not a" single thing
"waiting for" all the pain
"to" disappear

idk about the "if you had just for once stopped thinking about yourself" line.

thanks for ur opinions i appreciate them!
 
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