What do u think of my poem?

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Butterfly

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i know i asked that question already but there was just two answers..
honest answers please =]
1-10 plz rate


I never thought
that I will be in love
the one I'm prohibited for
my life was a dream
sweet like an ice cream
he use to make me it
or I thought he did
thought it will last
but its past
because of you
appeared out of blue
my guardian angel
has done his job well
made a beautiful fairytale
where I'm destined for a prince who
...is not you
the angel put me in another fairytale
and the happiness failed
Life was like a dream
before you appeared
nothing could make me sad
but now everything is bad
nothing could ever give me more pain
than wishing I was the queen of yours in vain
 
It is still not completed.....coz it dosent contain any characters{ ! , . "}
But if u hv really composed it on ur own, then it is the BEST...
i'll gv 8/10 ..
Keep going..
 
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