what do u make out of my poem?

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my boat is sinking
i fawsaw this for some time in the whirl pool we will drown
as every one uses us for money and power
familys fall and friend fade away
lovers lost to the grave
when it comes to the crunch youve got ur back
when it come to the end
can you say you lived your life
or worked it
did you earn love
or did u buy it
the jungle and sea seem like paradice to me
this cerment beast that tramples and covers all has our minds blocked
evolved did we into slobs
goverment and terrorists childthrowing there toys wen they dont get what they want
they lead us like lambs to a slaughter
hypocracy and contradiction rules my life
an open mind is what i have
and free will is my wish
to run in a jungle to live like animals do
i was for some one to say i love you too
this world has gone wrong
ignorance is bliss
no medicin is able to cure it
what will you do when it dies
im no one important
i wouldnt be missed
i just want paradice and bliss
please hear my call
live free like you want
you wont die
live a little
live the day
spread our wings to fly away
 
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